1. Voice (Volume, rate, pausing, emphasis etc)
Reflection:Volume is too small, emphasis is all the time the same and week and low so it gives not cheerful impression. It is not comfortable to listen even just 3 min.
Goals: more confident and cheerful and have emphasis.
2. Body Language (Eye contact, gestures, posture etc)
Reflection: eye contact is little, I used arms meaninglessly, posture is not bad
Goals: do more eye-contact, do adequate gesture simply. Look everyone.
3. Visuals (Images or text on slides, timing etc)
Reflection: too much? slide, but a lot of picture is easy to understand and catch attention text sides was proper. Too long time/ one so it can be boring.
Goals: make timing/ one slide shorter.
4. Preparation Process (Topic selection, notes, visuals creation, rehearsals
etc)
Reflection: I felt Rehearsal should be done since a week ago, at least 3 days, to practice several times. Topic was good because it has a lot of visual images. Notes should be more easy to catch the key-words. This time I used a kind of script rather than notes, so it made me lost.
Goals: make useful notes, which contains keywords, choose topic earlier, learn how to display slides effectively from other people.
I'm so sorry for being late to write a feedback to your presentation.
返信削除I really enjoyed your presentation and felt that your choice of the topic and your slides were very good. It was an very interesting topic and all the visual slides helped me understand about the topic very well.
However, you might could improve on the eye contact while you talk. I also often look at the script during the presentation and it is really difficult not to look at it at all, but if you could look at the audience more, I think it will help to drag the audience more to your presentation.
But, throughout your presentation, I felt your passion toward the topic and I enjoyed listening to it!
again, I'm sorry for being late to write a comment!!!
midori